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I wasn't happy with some

I wasn't happy with some details. Snailhouse is now brown. Fits better. The displacement at the ground was too strong. And the image is overall a bit more colorful and a tad bit darker now.

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Nice, all the individual

Nice, all the individual elements look great. - What it is still lacking in my opinion though is some more pronounced lighting and a better composition. Right now the mushrooms, the moss and the snail are all the same size on the image (if you blur your eyes), while the immediate foreground is quite empty. That makes the composition a bit unbalanced in my eyes. - If you google for "snail mushroom" there are lots of inspirational images that might help to still improve the image in regards to lighting and composition...;)

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Yes, i know  there is still

Yes, i know  there is still room for lots of improvements. Snailslime, more assets, a better compositing and lighting, and and and. If i just had more time ... I-m so happy

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I don´t think it needs more

I don´t think it needs more elements, just a more compact and focused shot of what you have in the scene already. - A lower camera for instance, on eye height with the snail, maybe the snail a bit closer to the mushrooms and stronger DOF to focus the view onto one or two elements only in the image, while keeping the rest of the elements only as suggestion of the forrest. - Just some thoughts, in case you still want to work on it a bit further. Wink

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The important part is done.

I am through. Feel free to create an improved version. The important part is done. We have quite a few more issues in the tracker now I-m so happy

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Good effort. I haven't done

Good effort. I haven't done any macro work before - it's a tricky business!

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